I probably went a little too far on the illustrations with this animatic, however, I've set the scene of my characters environment, motivations and onsequences of failure. Doing the voiceovers as a placeholder for the real voiceover artists to come and do their thing has also taught me a lot. This is now an old version and I have already moved onto a newer version of this which serves the character, plot and humour a lot better. I've had the chance to think more about the philosophical viewpoint of my topic matter as well. Looking forward to presenting this version to my mentors.