Hey guys, hope your'e well. Thought I'd continue my diary entry's by uploading my updated pitch bible. The annoying thing is, its 27MB (which is too big to upload) so for speed, I'm just going to give you the dropbox link:

https://www.dropbox.com/s/4rb5npq23gedffy/UPDATED_FAMILY_BRITANNIA_PITCH_BIBLE_Jide_Johnson_25th_Jan.pdf?dl=0  

Since my kickoff call with the mentors and the THU hangout last friday, this document has been updated in the following ways.

1. The audience for the show (target broadcasters) is now crystal clear.

2. Edwards backstory is now more clearly spelled out.

3. Therefore his core wounds and motivations are more apparent.

4. How the rest of the family tie in to his tech startup has also been spelled out.

This is a work in porgress people, so feel free to rip it to shreds again and throw any critique at me you may wish. I'm here to learn and grow. Thanks :)